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Last train home

By brett365
A very well selling picture but at my last fair someone picked fault with it and I'm now interested in others comments.

Tags: Transport Trains and stations

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I'm interested with what they picked fault with? I think it's a cracking shot. No critique from me I'm afraid. I like it.

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8 Dec 2012 6:20PM
Yes, I agree. You don't need critique. Stunning. I hope I can take a picture like this in future.
pablophotographer 5 628 253
8 Dec 2012 6:33PM
I am no railways expert but I think he or she considers the train on the left (which looks modern) spoils the picture. A tighter cropping (excluding only the left side) could eliminate the issue.
Like they say you can't please everyone all of the time, for me I think it's a great image, if I could take a photo half as good as this I would be well pleased with myself, simple stunning.

Mary
paulbroad 8 114 1034 United Kingdom
8 Dec 2012 9:23PM
No technical data supplied. Was this shot on film and scanned I wonder.

Was the critique technical or subjective. The image is a fine railway shot with a lot of impact. My comments would be subjective, a bottom and left crop to shift the main part of the scene to the left and a cooler sepia. This is very warm on my tablet screen.

Shots like this will sell like hot cakes to the railway buffs because of what they are. Whilst I am not criticising your technique here, some very popularsubjects often sell well even with technical errors.

Paul
iancrowson Plus
6 211 142 United Kingdom
9 Dec 2012 12:23PM
There are hidden shadows, the composition is only ok, lots of detail are out of focus BUT if it sells well so what.
Ian

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