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Leafy lane

By Graysshootin
Autumn colours in Knarsdale. This is a disused railway line

Tags: Landscape and travel

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NEWMANP Plus
8 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
14 Feb 2013 10:05PM
hello,
there are a lot of nice things about this image and it has quality and good light.

but
it really looks as if you were undecided as to whether the top half or the bottom half should be the image and you couldnt decide so you tried to include everything.
ill do two mods to show what i mean. there are two super compositiopns in there waiting to come out but as it stands its too split on the centre. other wise cant fault it
Phil

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Jestertheclown Plus
7 7.2k 249 England
14 Feb 2013 10:49PM
Phil's mods. are good but I'd want to increase the contrast slightly as well.
Also, despite there not being a genuinely vertical line in it, I don't think it's straight.
Look at the end of the path.

Bren.
14 Feb 2013 11:49PM
Wow thanks Phil, I think I prefer the second version. thanks for the advice and comments
Fogey 3 96 13 United Kingdom
16 Feb 2013 10:57AM
Of course, had the shot been taken from a lower viewpoint, then the leaves on the ground as well as the leaves on the trees could have been shown to good effect.
paulbroad 8 108 988 United Kingdom
16 Feb 2013 6:41PM
A nice image in the first place and all the mods work too. It is possibly a touch over exposed, but light must have been low to use 1600ISO. I prefer the landscape mod but I really would like a figure walking either tiwards or away from the camera well back in the composition. That would be the finishing touch for me.

Paul
12 Apr 2013 11:57AM

Quote:Phil's mods. are good but I'd want to increase the contrast slightly as well.
Also, despite there not being a genuinely vertical line in it, I don't think it's straight.
Look at the end of the path.

Bren.

The end of the path wasn't straight.

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