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Leigh 2

By Anthony      
Hi folks

Another shot of Leigh today, this time with some of the advice from the last shot taken into account. (I still like the dress like this though, so not changed that Smile )

This is still from my very first model shoot, and at this point only a few shots into it.

As with the lst upload, any advice is welcome. Smile

Plenty more to come.

Anthony

Tags: Canon Liverpool 30d Model shoot Leigh Portraits and people

Voters: gazlowe, morpheus1955, paulashby and 13 more


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paulashby 11 10 1 United Kingdom
19 May 2012 9:59AM
This is great work for being your first model shoot, I've been been shooting for a while now and would be well pleased wth this image, the composition is good, like the low angle and the fact you've shot into light, great effort.

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Anthony 18 5.6k 17 United Kingdom
19 May 2012 10:04AM
thank you Paul, appreciate the feedback. Smile

Anthony
Coleslaw 14 13.4k 28 Wales
19 May 2012 10:06AM
Much better compared to first one, mate. Light looks good too.
Anthony 18 5.6k 17 United Kingdom
19 May 2012 10:09AM
cheers Cole. I deliberatley wanted to put the images up in order, to show the (hopefully) progression through the shots.

Thanks for dopping in.

Anthony Smile
Richsr 12 91 223 England
19 May 2012 10:29AM
Like the use of the location and the light too Anthony.
A couple of points from me: what is this shot about if it about the dress then its not really showing that to its best with the pose.
If its about the shoes and that is where your eyes are draw too then Ok. If it about the model on the steps then your eyes are drawn to the wrong place.
Just points you need to consider before you press the shutter.
Hope this makes sense.
Regards Richard
Anthony 18 5.6k 17 United Kingdom
19 May 2012 10:36AM
righto, yeah I can see what you mean. lol, thanks for that.

Learning all the time, hehe

Anthony
Coleslaw 14 13.4k 28 Wales
19 May 2012 10:40AM
Rich has his points......though......Too much thinking.... Head hurts.
Just press the f*cking shutter! Well, that's me anyway....lol
Anthony 18 5.6k 17 United Kingdom
19 May 2012 10:56AM
lol at Cole.... Smile I would put that forward as constuctive, but I really dont think they would accept it.

Anthony
tonyguitar Plus
7 77 37 Canada
21 May 2012 7:46AM
Light is pretty good and I like her dress. Only thing are the high heels. Because they are dark they look heavy. Black heels in wintertime with heavy coat and snow maybe, but here they gotta be light mauve or light something and then You'll be fine. TG

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