Let's go to the beach! by staszak

Comments

SandyMiller 17 932

28 May 2007 9:36AM

You've really given her a sense of purpose. Love it and wouldn't know how to suggest improvements.
Perhaps it might have been nice to see more of the shocked expression of the person behind her? Just a thought.

kaybee 19 8.6k 28

28 May 2007 9:43AM

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The 'shock' effect would have been even stronger with a bloke in the office............but I think it is a cracking image

MediumSizeUnavailable 17 1.5k 63

28 May 2007 9:47AM

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very good. perhaps going for a landscape format would permit you to get the person in the bg fully in the picture, with the girl more to the right

kinfatric 18 550 9

28 May 2007 10:46AM

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terrific and agree with the comments with regard to the shocked person

skoffs 16 3

28 May 2007 11:58AM

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Great concept, well executed. How may times did you throw the papers in the air to get that arrangement ?

Hedgehog 17

28 May 2007 1:45PM

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I have to agree with some comments I saw here. The guy in the back could be better in the picture (but still in the background) and landscape mode.
Still it is very nice work.

NevP 17 853 13

28 May 2007 2:20PM

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This is very good, very well set up and executed. Maybe the fact that the person in the bg is not in full view that makes this more believeable as an image. 1st class.