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light lanterns

By sarasij  
normal outdoor photo shoot

Tags: Model Light Face Eye Festival Girl Enjoy Light and shade Humour and fun

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banehawi Plus
15 2.2k 4051 Canada
6 Nov 2016 12:35PM
I think this is impossible to critique.

You have it exactly as you want it, and know what you are doing, so we can only have opinions, rather than privide help.

I think this is best placed in the General Gallery where its eligible for votes and awards


Regards


Willie

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paulbroad Plus
12 131 1286 United Kingdom
6 Nov 2016 2:53PM
Very interesting and quite well done. Hardly a normal outdoor photoshoot! Possibly a little more light on the girls face? You have the exposure well handled and I guess understand spot metering but I wonder if a tiny burst of flash fill might add a different dimension.

Paul
dudler Plus
16 987 1537 England
6 Nov 2016 4:41PM
Three thoughts...

The third arm is a distraction - I've cloned it out very crudely, but a shot after it was withdrawn but before the balloon moved would be easier on the eye.

I then saw a couple of dark marks on the balloon interior, which seem worth tidying up.

Finally, I wonder if makign the maximum blacks really black adds to the shot, or destroys the look you were after?

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