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By Ragtime
Good Head Shot

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Squirrel 15 471 7 England
1 Feb 2008 11:11PM
Lovely looking lady, but I feel that there is too much hand. also the hair strand is causing a shadow along her nose and to my eye it cuts her face in two.
Connor_SLR 14 74 United Kingdom
2 Feb 2008 1:00AM
Nice looking model and a nice looking shot, I'd try to get rid of the hair/shadow and also do something about the shadow over her eye, i dont know if you could have bounced some light back onto her face or something?

Carabosse Plus
19 42.5k 270 England
2 Feb 2008 2:18AM
Potentially good but the harsh lighting is unflattering. I've uploaded a modification (B/W) that attempts to mitigate this.
PeteLowe 14 3
2 Feb 2008 7:17AM
i see what the others mean about the lighting, but i like it.
SKavanagh 14 312 5 England
2 Feb 2008 7:23AM
Excellent shot well captured
kaybee 18 8.3k 27 Scotland
2 Feb 2008 10:12AM
It was obviously taken in bright, sunny conditions and I don't really have a problem with the shadows.
Yes, a reflector would put some more light on the face, but that may flatten the features a bit.
It is the forarm with the shadow that I find most distracting.
I too have done a modification
rice 14 6 England
2 Feb 2008 1:08PM
Realy like this, I like the framing
and have no problem with the forearm,
good portrait.
2 Feb 2008 6:22PM
very nice. main thing that bothers me is that bright area at the bottom. Suppose it's her top, but it is very bright and distracts. But again, overall nice work

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