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By totti
Trying to get a little soft expression.
Difficult sometimes with shadows when you have no time.

Tags: Children photography Portraits and people

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paulbroad 10 123 1245 United Kingdom
4 Oct 2013 6:46PM
Such a high ISO again. Nice shot with your characteristic softness which works here. Ideally you need to be much closer with just her face and the bubble for a more dramatic composition.


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mrswoolybill Plus
11 1.2k 1929 United Kingdom
4 Oct 2013 7:39PM
Gorgeous, your pastel look again. The sheen on the bubble is especially effective.
I'd simplify slightly. It doesn't need that sprig of green leaf behind her head, that takes the eye away from her face. And it doesn't need the hem of her dress - as above... A tighter crop would work better for me.
Mod to follow, but those are the only changes I'd make.
banehawi Plus
13 1.8k 3881 Canada
4 Oct 2013 10:30PM
A really nice soft and delicate portrayal of a moment in time, the lifespan of a bubble.

I noticed that leaf too, but in addition, - a preference for me would that the "horizon", the meeting of grass and greenery would not intersect with her forehead.

Mod loaded. Just a suggestion.



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