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Lisa

By MDR_Photo  
This is Lisa my new girlfriend and therefore new model too! Still not great at these shots so some comments and contructive criticisms about techniques would be a great help. Lighting was from a window, ceiling lights bounced of the wall behind me and flash the same.

Comments/Criticism/Clicks/Mods welcome.

Tags: Portraits and people

Voters: bytorphoto, chrisfroud, danpen and 3 more


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chrisfroud 15 521
27 Nov 2005 2:50PM
A well lit and flattering portrait!

Chris.

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yoguko 16 302 United Kingdom
27 Nov 2005 3:02PM
Hi, I made a couple of changes to your original. I hope you don't think I was being too cheeky. It seems I uploaded 2 of them by mistake. My apologies!
MDR_Photo 15 872 England
27 Nov 2005 3:18PM
Hi yoguko, thanks very much for your Mod it looks good on My Pda screen but will be able to look Properly in the Morring. Certinly wasn't cheeky i alwoys ask.
danpen 16 15 United Kingdom
27 Nov 2005 8:53PM
Both the lighting and the pose are lovely and natural, it's a really good portrait.

I'd be tempted to crop a bit from the top and right hand side, so that her hair was very near to the edge of the shot and maybe take a tiny bit off the bottom to balance it. If I'm going to be picky the bra strap could be cloned out (or better still hidden under the blouse to start with).

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