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sawsengee Plus
12 6 22 Malaysia
15 Mar 2019 6:09AM
Hi Bobby, you have an excellent model in the right pose & visual setting but the following points could be addressed to make the portrait different (better?):
1. 3 highlight burntout points 2 on each shoulder & one on the neck;
2. an unusual mole above her right lip;
3. she had uneven skin tone on her hands & upper arms.
Personally, I am not used to studio portrait & editing but here are 2 mods which I hope you like.
Mod 1 addresses the above 3 points & smoothing of the background & skin tone without changing the skin colours;
Mod 2 using selective gaussian blurring to concentrate on her face & lovely necklace.
Best regards & Namaste. ee Smile

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Robert51 10 7 88 United Kingdom
15 Mar 2019 8:22AM
Really like the image. I think most things have been covered above.

The main thing with images like this is final toning. The colour tones of the subject fighting the background instead of working with it due to how light the skin is. The mod I have tried to pull the two together to give you an idea.

Great image and keep them coming...
dudler Plus
15 827 1475 England
15 Mar 2019 9:40AM
Hi there - mod added.

A tiny bit of careful cloning from the immediately adjacent area with a very small brush.

More care and something other than the 100% opacity that I used would probably blend it perfectly.

This is a really beautiful image of a model I've worked with twice: it plays to her considerable strengths with the makeup and wonderful jewellery.
Lillian Plus
9 22 17 United Kingdom
16 Mar 2019 10:45PM
Bobby, a lovely portrait
with some good mods

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