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By Bluesky65  
Model Christina backlit by the sun and reflector used for fill. Contrast etc was increased with the intention of framing the face.

Tags: Portrait Natural light Christina Portraits and people

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abeeror2 4 22 Australia
9 Nov 2012 9:00PM
Brilliant lighting, top portrait!

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9 Nov 2012 11:30PM
Thank you. I wanted Christina to have her back to the sun on this shot as she has fiery red hair, but for some reason I prefer it in black and white ...
debu 6 India
9 Nov 2012 11:36PM
Very nice mono and model.
debu
andy p 12
10 Nov 2012 12:14AM
Love the look..... nice capture.
10 Nov 2012 12:55AM
Thanks guy's Smile
arhb Plus
9 3.2k 68 United Kingdom
10 Nov 2012 9:26AM
Lovely portrait - the subject is posed nicely with good eye contact.
I like the idea of the contrast, although it is always nice to see some detail in the darker areas also.
The space camera right seems unnecessary to me, so by cropping, allows the subject to be placed more off-centre.
10 Nov 2012 10:56AM
Thank you, I completely agree about the need to crop. Inspirational website by the way Smile
arhb Plus
9 3.2k 68 United Kingdom
10 Nov 2012 11:30AM
Thank you Smile
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3558 Canada
10 Nov 2012 1:11PM
I would love to see the colour version of this Paul. If you still have it, you can upload it here by clicking modifications, then upload.

Its a matter of intent and personal taste really. Youve deliberately used a high contrast, and the idea is good, but for me its too dark. In the image, theres areas with no hair detail at all, - and her neck is barely visible. I agree with arhb on the right side, however I would not crop the top. her fingers in her hair are blown, so you have a very bright spot there that attracts the eye. You can clone some hair over it.

Uploaded a mod, recovered shadow detail, cloned out fingers, sharpened eyes, slightly softened face using a diffuse blur. I think you still have the framing here, less heavy, but you be the judge.



Hope this helps,



Regards


Willie
10 Nov 2012 2:24PM
Thanks for the feedback and tips Willie, I'll be back ... in colour Wink
paulbroad 9 117 1077 United Kingdom
11 Nov 2012 8:14AM
It's a nice portrait. I would crop a little from the right but do think you have lost a lot of detail in the shadows, particularly the hair. I think a bit of judicial work with the dodge tool could work wonders here.

The colour version might be spectacular.

Paul
11 Nov 2012 9:58AM
Hi Paul, I do agree that I 'over cooked' the contrast, re the colour version, I have uploaded it via the modification tab. be interested to see how it could have been enhanced.
paulbroad 9 117 1077 United Kingdom
11 Nov 2012 7:10PM
I like the colour version. Possibly just brighten up a bit as it does seem very slightly flat. Nice crop. After most of my photographic life working largley in mono, I think the current trend to use mono is a tiuch over done. Mono suites harder gritty shots. I like thid type of image in colour.

Paul
11 Nov 2012 7:20PM
Glad you like the colour version Paul, I must admit that I have been going through a bit of a b/w phase. Be it b/w or colour I have realised that I have a lot to learn when it comes to knowing how to bring an image to life through post processing. I guess developing my photography would also reduce the amount of post work required.
parob 6 3 74 France
16 Nov 2012 4:45PM
Interesting what colour and B&W do to a portrait. It is as if the portrait was of two different persons. B&W, simplifying the focus, concentrates on the eyes and the mouth. In the colour shot, hair colour is so powerful that the model's facial expression is transformed. I also think there are fewer technical problems with your colour shot. Cropping is OK, but I would suggest toning down the model's right elbow. It catches all the light and appears way too white. Notice that in the B&W composition you lost hair detail by the ear. Colour maintains it. Kudo's just the same. I love your model's expression. Paul
17 Nov 2012 9:37PM
I appreciate the feedback Paul.

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