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Lough Bray 2

By paulcr
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Many thanks a apologies to all who commented and clicked on the last version of this but I decided it was overworked and the more I looked the more I didn't like it. This is the reworked version. hope you like it better, I do.

Tags: Landscape and travel

Voters: deviant, suregork, conrad and 19 more


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WILCZEWSKI 13 1
24 Apr 2006 12:32PM
click one more time!!! Smile


Michal

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paulcr 14 1.5k 9 Ireland
24 Apr 2006 12:33PM
Thanks Michal. Paul
sut68 15 2.0k 76 England
24 Apr 2006 12:35PM
Didn't see your original version but this one looks fine to me.

Paul
PatrickSmith 14 1.2k 2 United States
24 Apr 2006 12:45PM
Well, this was a difficult scene to shoot because it was taken in such bright contrasty light. The foreground is clear and sharp. The assortment and placement of the rocks look good as well. So while this looks fine, it would look great with lower, warmer and/or more even light, possibly with more cloudiness around. Great place though, so I hope to see more from here. I see I missed an interesting one, so I'll check that one out too.
Patrick
Hanners 13 875 10 Ireland
24 Apr 2006 12:46PM
Great composition, although I might've been tempted to crop the the bottom stone out...


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paulcr 14 1.5k 9 Ireland
24 Apr 2006 12:51PM

Quote:, it would look great with lower, warmer and/or more even light,
excse my ignorance, but do you mean a more even light throughout the image as in equal sunlight bg to fg? And what do you mean by "lower" light? Later in the day? Thanks. Paul
tonymarq 13 1 United States
24 Apr 2006 1:02PM
Paul still looks good and the stone at the shore lead you eyes across the lake to the mountain,well done!

stay well
tonymarq
paulcr 14 1.5k 9 Ireland
24 Apr 2006 1:04PM
Cheers Tony. Paul
sut68 15 2.0k 76 England
24 Apr 2006 1:12PM
I think Patrick means that rather than shooting in the bright midday sunshine, if there was a little cloud cover then this would soften/diffuse the light and stop it being so contrasty, thereby allowing more detail in the shadow areas.

Also, "lower" light is the light created first thing in the morning or late evening, when the sun is lower in the sky and generates a better light.

I hope this helps.

Paul
paulcr 14 1.5k 9 Ireland
24 Apr 2006 1:25PM
It does Paul, cheers. PAul
Billies 14 7 Ireland
24 Apr 2006 2:07PM
Like it very much especially the cloud reflections in the rock pools.
Bill
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14 47 13 United States
24 Apr 2006 2:46PM
Yes, a better version--differet time of day might make a totally different image-- but I sure would be slipping back every now and then "cause it is a great site!


Jennnnn
24 Apr 2006 9:48PM
Hi Paul.....Sorry to say, I missed the 1st version, but this one you seem to have captured brilliantly!

Larger Version is a must-see....Shows intricate detail to the rocks and reflections....Great looking sky as well!

Thank you for all of your kind comments, they are truly appreciated....x

Hoping you're having a really great day so far...Cheers,
Suzan Smile
paulcr 14 1.5k 9 Ireland
24 Apr 2006 11:36PM
Many thanks folks for all the comments. Jennnn, it's actually only about 10 miles from the house but it's finding a combination of time and weather tut.. bloody work gets in the way lol.
Thank you Suzan and Bill. PAul
keithh 15 25.5k 33 Wallis And Futuna
24 Apr 2006 11:42PM
It's a better version, Paul, but it does still suffer from the light.

I've cropped it in your mods which is the type of framing I'd be going for at this time of day. Better to look for shape, form and texture in this light and forget the big sky picture.
paulcr 14 1.5k 9 Ireland
25 Apr 2006 12:05AM
Yep, see what you mean Keith. I'll head up there at a better time of day next time, maybe this evening as its sunny out today too. Thank you. Paul
John_Humphreys 13 69 2 Ireland
28 Apr 2006 1:45PM
I didn't see the last one Paul but this is really good. John
Emmaelle 13 12
16 May 2006 8:18AM
Looks good to me! I like it just how it is!
Lovely details and colour, well done!
Emma
paulcr 14 1.5k 9 Ireland
16 May 2006 11:53PM
Cheers Emma. Paul
deviant 15 3.1k 1 United Kingdom
17 May 2006 12:53AM
Nice change a daytime photo! Still has humongous foreground rule in effect though eh? :o)

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