Seems to me a rather timid effort. We don't see any faces which means we don't feel involved in the moment. At the very least I would have cropped out much of the distraction and moved the centre of nterest to a stronger part of the frame.
Seems to me a rather timid effort. We don't see any faces which means we don't feel involved in the moment. At the very least I would have cropped out much of the distraction and moved the centre of nterest to a stronger part of the frame.
