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By mckena07
this is me on my friends birthday going out to the pub!

Tags: Close-up and macro Digital art Mwah Nude and glamour

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Coleslaw 11 13.4k 28 Wales
25 Feb 2008 12:48PM
Is that a reflection or something?
The framing is way off. Maybe fill a bit more of the frame with your friend rather than the painting at the back.

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francisg 12 703 1 United Kingdom
25 Feb 2008 1:34PM
A shame about that catchlight/flare. The subject would be improved if it filled the frame by cropping the top 2/3rds.

ade_mcfade 12 15.2k 216 England
25 Feb 2008 3:39PM
you look good in the shot Smile

but the shot itself could be improved a lot...

you're sat down with your legs out to one side, so best to do a landscape version of this so you can see them better.

Next, the shot wants to be taken from a lot lower than this - we're better off seeing the carpet and settee with you in the middle/top area than having all that room at the top.

Next - beware of refelctive things when you're using the flash. Whar you've got here is a bounce back of the flash which can work, but here it dominates.

main thing is to get you filling the frame more, we can see more wall than you - and you're far more attractive than the wall !
graceland 11 2.5k 2 United Kingdom
25 Feb 2008 3:42PM
one mod
graceland 11 2.5k 2 United Kingdom
25 Feb 2008 5:26PM
ok a couple of mods for u any good ??

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