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Memetik buak karsen

By yoesoef

Tags: Portraits and people

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Philo Plus
6 99 83 England
16 Feb 2011 7:00PM
With a few tweaks this is a delightful shot of a gorgeous little girl. You have caught the moment well with a great expression and I just love the hat. The girl is a little central so a crop to the right places her on a third whilst leaving room on the left for her to look into. The blown sky doesn't bother me but it has left the girl looking under exposed so a bit of flash would have helped here.
In my mod I addressed this with a curves adjustment and I do hope you see this as an improvement.
Phil

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lianna 6 13 United Kingdom
17 Feb 2011 3:54PM
I think everything has been said above. My main comment was going to be the centralised position, to put here more to a side would improve it!!!

A lovely capture though Smile x x

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