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By jim28bob
I'm a new member and totally new to photography so here's my first upload

Tags: Close-up and macro

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.


wisp 8 United Kingdom
28 Aug 2010 8:32PM
slightly underexposed would look alot better if it was pristine white but other than that great capture

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28 Aug 2010 10:12PM
Excellent capture.
Jestertheclown 9 7.6k 252 England
28 Aug 2010 11:17PM
Hi James and welcome to Epz.

Good to see you uploading to the critique gallery. You'll get plenty of good, honest advice in here.

This is pretty good for a first attempt. It's reasonably well focused and you've certainly caught the action.
It's a bit dark, possibly underexposed slightly and the flash is reflected on the milk.
My only other niggle is that it's cropped very tightly across the top.
Hope this helps.

paulbroad 10 123 1198 United Kingdom
29 Aug 2010 7:58AM
Well done as an exercise. Needs just a little more room above and a boost the brightness and contrast - I assume it's milk, and it needs to be brighter.


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