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More mist

By helenlinda
Thanks so much for all your clicks and comments on the park fence.
Two more from the same morning, but of the same view. I was really drawn to this line of benches under the tree. I think the closer shot is the stronger image, but the second sets the scene.
Tomorrow will be a more cheerful upload!!
Thanks for looking
Hope you have enjoyed a lovely sunny day as we have here in Birmingham
Helen

Tags: Misty Landscape and travel Tree silhouette Wildlife and nature Cannon hill park October 08 Row of benches

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Comments


imagio 15 12 1 England
18 Oct 2008 9:20PM
Both are good but no 1 has something special Helen, bags of atmosphere

Bernie
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
18 Oct 2008 9:28PM
Thanks Bernie
Stace 13 2 2 England
18 Oct 2008 9:29PM
Lovely composition

Stace
lonely_oryx 14 61 55 England
18 Oct 2008 9:40PM
Lovely light. #1 for me
18 Oct 2008 9:50PM
Beautiful framing, very moody. Tony
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
18 Oct 2008 9:51PM
Thank you Stace, John and Tony
LenaP 14 United Kingdom
18 Oct 2008 9:54PM
I like the first one more, very nice!
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
18 Oct 2008 9:56PM
Thank you Lena
pamelajean Plus
15 1.6k 2238 United Kingdom
18 Oct 2008 10:08PM
Extremely atmospheric, excellent tree silhouette, good strong line of benches and fencing against the misty background.
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
18 Oct 2008 10:11PM
Thanks Pamela
mrswoolybill Plus
14 3.0k 2462 United Kingdom
18 Oct 2008 10:31PM
V1 for me, for the low viewpoint giving drama. Love the quiet formality of the composition.
Moira
pluckyfilly 15 351 33 United Kingdom
18 Oct 2008 10:47PM
the mist makes the shot all mysterious and lovely
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
18 Oct 2008 11:03PM
Thanks Moira and Ann for your comments
taggart Plus
17 47 14 United States
18 Oct 2008 11:11PM
I am more drawn to v2, both tell the story and are excellent!
JEnnnnnnnnnn
RAYMO 13 2 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2008 12:16AM
Lovely shot, nicely framed by the tree...

Ray
mikbee 14 3 8 Scotland
19 Oct 2008 4:14AM
No1 is the stronger as you say Helen.I would actually like to see this without the mist. There is more fencing and pillars obscured by the mist.Would be a good addition to the lines already there with the benches and fencing.Good scattering of FG leaves and good framing with the tree.
Mick.
CarolG 14 199 20 Greece
19 Oct 2008 7:18AM
A great composition. Carol
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2008 7:33AM
Thank you Jenn, Ray, Mick and Carol for your comments
sunshot 16 24 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2008 8:23AM
both look great but i really like v1 the best

marc
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2008 10:13AM
Thanks Marc
Frase 13 Scotland
19 Oct 2008 10:25AM
Super images , especially v1 as the tree frames the fence and benches nicely drawing your eye to the background .
Don
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2008 10:28AM
Thankyou Don for your comment
BlindMonkey 17 158 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2008 11:00AM
V1 from me, but both fantastic shots.

Ian
redstag 15 100 15 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2008 11:02AM
I think the tighter crop works well. An even tighter crop in from the left across the middle of the trunk and in a bit from the right to lose the end of the third bench could be stronger. I love the misty atmosphere. (Bet it would look great with someone sat on one of the benches too!)
Jon
ketch 14 770 50 Turks And Caicos Islands
19 Oct 2008 11:11AM
Not so sure about V2 - but V1 is an intriguing shot and certainly captivated me - but why? I think the dark into light composition (and framing) helps as does the outrageous law flouting split right through the middle of the image - which just proves rules are there to be broken. The slight angle of the benches and fence create some useful tension so this is not a serene calming image at all - and the mist adds atmosphere.

The part bench to the right probably doesn't bring too much to the party and my guess is that the image would benefit were you to crop this out.

Best wishes

Robert
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2008 11:28AM
Thanks Ian, Jon and Robert. Its really helpful to see where others would make the crop how others see the elements that are not really contributing to the composition. I didn't go for a really close crop because I din't want to loose too much of that horizontal line, but you have given me another way of looking at it. Robert I just love those words "the outrageous law flouting split". Would make a good title!!
pentony 13 3 England
19 Oct 2008 11:31AM
Nice images..Wel done u have 30
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2008 11:32AM
Thanks Pauline
jdenman 13 19 5 Spain
19 Oct 2008 11:38AM
I really like V1, a beautiful shot !
John
woolybill1 Plus
15 38 78 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2008 11:44AM
Isn't it amazing how different these two versions look?
The strength of #1 lies partly in the absence of the misty sky corner, the crop emphasising the fallen leaves and the contrast between horizontals, verticals and diagonals in the collection of banches and fencing, the pale centre surrounded by darker tones. #2 has more mist as per title, it is clearly a misty morning at altitude; it is more straightforwardly pictorial, including the almost complete shape of the tree which becomes the subject of the image rather than its frame.
I like both, very much, and equally. I tend to agree - just - that the end of the bench on the right of #1 could be better removed, and if cropping I would suggest taking the crop line through the nearest fence-post to retain dark framing.
Bill
FeatherFriend 13 38 217 England
19 Oct 2008 12:41PM
#1 for me Helen, lovely shot.
Geoff.
Rach1970 13 14 1 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2008 12:44PM
This is full of atmosphere... let alone lines and contrasts. Nice work Helen, but yes wasn't it great to see the sun yesterday?!
Rach
rangerpaul 14 19 7 England
19 Oct 2008 7:45PM
This one and the last upload are two wonderful shots full of atmosphere.
Paul
Rogerex 15 32 12 Australia
20 Oct 2008 10:44PM
I like the atmospheree, and prefer V1 as it seems to have more impact.
Roger
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
21 Oct 2008 3:19AM
Thanks John, Bill, Geoff, Rach, Paul and Roger
nickyv32 14 135 England
21 Oct 2008 10:30PM
lovely misty shot, No 1 for me, like the closer shot.

Nicky
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
21 Oct 2008 10:31PM
Thanks Nicky
Rende 14 38 4 Netherlands
21 Oct 2008 11:04PM
Wonderful composition with beautifully subdued light. V1 for me.
Rende
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
22 Oct 2008 8:50AM
Thank you Rende
TrevBatWCC Plus
13 13 19 England
29 Oct 2008 2:21PM
Another fine pair of atmospheric images, Helen. Think I prefer V1, and though I like the wider format in V2, the eye is drawn to the white sky top right.
TrevB Smile
helenlinda Plus
14 374 22 United Kingdom
30 Oct 2008 10:51PM
Thanks for your comment Trev. I agree with what you have said. The wider view is mainly there to give a little more of the context.

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