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Moses

By dusfim
Photo taken at the same place of my previous uploads. Acting as Moses in the Holy-week held in Malta.

Tags: Portraits and people

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Briwooly 10 452 5 England
12 Nov 2012 8:45PM
A real nice job of this one Mario

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banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3465 Canada
12 Nov 2012 9:30PM
I like this a lot better than the previous uploads Mario. The skin tone is better, much less "muddy", eyes are great, and background filling is good.

The face is a little underexposed, - my only suggestion, and Ive loaded a mod a little brighter.

I wont even mentions composition, but heres an interesting read on the subject for you and anyone dropping in: http://www.dpreview.com/articles/1304360703/breaking-the-rules



Regards



Willie
strokebloke Plus
7 493 17 England
12 Nov 2012 10:13PM
Whatever may or may not be good or bad about this it fulfills the primary objective.
It catches your eye. It makes you look twice. I makes you want to get closer to really look at it.
That makes it a very good photograph.

Like Willie, I like it more than your previous upload. Well done
banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3465 Canada
12 Nov 2012 11:04PM
Hi Jack, - missed seeing you on the site, - hope alls well.

W
alistairfarrugia 3 164 88 Malta
12 Nov 2012 11:21PM
The only thing I don't like about this is what seems to be rough editing at the top of the image - where there's the black fur or whatever that is. Was there something there that you edited out? Otherwise I love this! Well done.
paulbroad 8 114 1034 United Kingdom
13 Nov 2012 11:02AM
Nice image. I would crop down to the top of his hat and just brighten a touch.

Paul
Joline Plus
10 27 53 United States
13 Nov 2012 1:48PM
This is so well done, much better portrait than the previous in my eye. I like the find rugged lines of his face, and the way he is looking into the distance.
moiral 6 12 Scotland
13 Nov 2012 5:24PM
I really like the eyes on this chap. Moira
dusfim 6 Malta
13 Nov 2012 5:26PM
Thanks to all for your comments and constructive critique.

Willie, yes I agree after seeing your upload that the face was a little bit underexposed.

Alistair, I left the fur as it was to leave it natural as it was. Thanks again to you all.

dusfim

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