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Most of us fail to realise the Good things when it is around us...and looking far for those opportunities.......:)

By madhoosphotography    
please friends expecting your criticism..............Smile Expecting Criticism except for those logos please.. ... i was about to post the picture with only one logo of was unfortunate.....hope u all understand......Smile
Thank u all

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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3530 Canada
23 Nov 2012 9:01PM
Needs feet. Im trying for the worlds shortest critique!


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Irishkate Plus
6 38 100 United Kingdom
23 Nov 2012 10:19PM
Something I've done too often too, cutting off parts of feet.
I'd probably clone out the other person on the right also.
Then we'd have a lovely candid image of the young couple.
Sooty_1 6 1.5k 220 United Kingdom
24 Nov 2012 1:01AM
As above, plus, I'm not sure about the colour balance. It looks like it was taken with a Hipstamatic app, and I can't guess what the background is. I'm afraid I'm spending more time looking at it than I am the couple. I'd try and get rid of that intruding posterior too.

pamelajean Plus
10 969 1832 United Kingdom
24 Nov 2012 12:17PM
I always feel that when you have a picture of someone taking a photograph, it's good to see what that person is shooting, and so I would have liked to see more of the sunset on the left of the image, taking the viewer's eye in the direction of the camera. However, I realise there is someone standing to the left of the man, and it wasn't possible to avoid him. The couple are your subject, but a bit tight in the frame, and the feet have been mentioned already.
Sooty_1 6 1.5k 220 United Kingdom
24 Nov 2012 2:13PM
It's not a camera, it's a pair of binoculars....Tongue
paulbroad 9 116 1064 United Kingdom
24 Nov 2012 2:27PM
Decent candid, but you need either more or less. Get the feet in or frame much tighter on the tops of the bodies. Not sure colour looks natural?

pamelajean Plus
10 969 1832 United Kingdom
25 Nov 2012 9:12PM
Oops, silly me......definitely binoculars.

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