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Hi Anthony had another look at these large this time. I think your flash position was to far to the LHS and would have been better more central as you have a given her a dark eye on one side (V1 and V3). It also looks as if it was too low as the catch light appears to be in the lower part of the eye. Always worth checking catch lights as you start to shoot
Regards Richard
Regards Richard