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saeidNL 6 3 Netherlands
21 Apr 2010 7:37AM
Beautiful portraits shot and Like the light/shadow in this one.
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ollimar71 5 2 1 United Kingdom
21 Apr 2010 7:48AM
I think you were almost there. I like the hair definition against the background on the left, and her pose is good. I would have made the lighting a bit more dramatic - more shadow on the right to almost completely hide her arm, also the nose shadow on the face would be a bit more flattering. Watch your crop too - the theory says we shouldn't crop across a natural body joint, like the wrist. I hope this helps.
johnnyboy114 7 231 106 United Kingdom
21 Apr 2010 8:30AM
Bold......needs a touch more light to bring her out of the background (maybe one light from behind slightly?), but I like this. Dramatic light, good tones, nicely shot and framed....good stuff!
21 Apr 2010 8:32AM
thanks for the comments ollimar71, very helpful tips. I was wondering if I should have moved my main light a little higher to help with the nose shadows?

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