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By brebre
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Jestertheclown 8 7.4k 249 England
16 Apr 2011 9:52PM
Hi Bre. Welcome to Epz. and the critique gallery in particular.
You'll receive honest, worthwhile feedback on your work here and if there's anything you'd like to know, just ask. Someone will have the answer!
Your shot;
Well, there is one rather striking fault with it, in that it needs turning around! If you ever upload a shot and afterwards realise that you've got it wrong somehow, you're able to remove it and re-upload or replace it once a day.
Having done that, I applied a little noise reduction and sharpened it slightly.
If you look at my mod. you'll see that I've also used a closer crop and that somehow in the transition, the area just above your glasses has become damaged. That's my doing (whoops!) and it doesn't appear in your original.
I'm guessing it's a self portrait and as such, you've made a pretty good job of getting yourself and your little girl (?) in the shot. You've just missed the edge of her glasses but as a family snapshot I think it's fine.
Hope this helps.
I'll look forward to seeing more of your work.

Best wishes,

Bren.

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