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Oh! I look at you & the calmness prevails...

By eliteankit
The man has come to the river side, finally. He appreciates & acknowledges the nature & its supremacy.
Lovely sight!

Tags: Think River Mountain Man Abstract People Side Specialist and abstract Calm Serene Romantic Landscape and travel Portraits and people

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Very nice shot!

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Carabosse 15 41.1k 270 England
29 May 2010 1:56AM
This certainly has a pensive feel to it although one can't help noticing you have cut off his feet! Wink

The photo looks a bit washed out. In the mod I've uploaded for you I've increased contrast by means of levels and curves adjustments. Hope that helps.
paulbroad 10 123 1249 United Kingdom
29 May 2010 8:11AM
Potentially very nice, but you needed to point the camera down a bit - cut off the sky and include his feet. The auto exposure may then also have performed better - you are about one stop over exposed.

29 May 2010 11:59AM
Nicely done by u, Focus Man!
Tooth 13 5.8k 227 Ireland
30 May 2010 1:20AM
I yhink the concept behind this is good but it was taken in very boring and harsh light conditions. The mods above can rescue this to some extanet, but there's no substitute for good natural light at the time of exposure.

Others have touched on compositional faults; one that seems to have been missed but screams at me is that the water line cuts across his face. A change of position should have been used to place his head either totally above or below the water line


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