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oldbarn

By Curleyphotos
just an old barn. i took it a little darker then usual,but i think it came out good.

Tags: General Black and white Landscape and travel

Voters: maratsuikka, phototwink,


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ray1 12 546 1 England
8 Mar 2009 7:45PM
As requested in the forums:

I dont think this is a great shot. It looks like it leans to the left (might just be the barn though). The trees are distracting in the foreground so I would have walked to the right to bring more of the barn into view and placed the barn further to the left (rule of thirds). I might also have got in a bit closer to lose some of the white space at the top. The pic also lacks detail - sort of soft. Otherwise the barn has potential if you can shoot it again.

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10 18 3 Scotland
8 Mar 2009 7:48PM
This could be a strong image, but lacks a little impact as it is. If you adjust the levels a bit (if you have the software to do so) you could bring more depth to the dark tones, and lift the lighter ones (eg where the sun is hitting the snow). I think it might also have benefitted if the barn had been a bit further to the left. If you shot the image in RAW, you might be able to retrieve some detail in the sky, too, as it looks empty at the moment. Hope this helps!
Anne
8 Mar 2009 7:53PM
thank you both very much. i do have many diffrent angles of this shot that i can upload maybe in the morning. as far as taking the picture in RAW, well Raw and i dont get along, but i can try Smile and as far as the sky, i agree...i hate non cloudy days but i can fix that with the cloud filter on adobe. thanks again Josh
Eviscera 10 1.1k 149 United Kingdom
8 Mar 2009 7:59PM
and when you do upload Josh , perhaps enable the "add modification" button.

If anyone does a suggested change to your picture they should say how they are tyring to help.

Either that or post it in the critique gallery.

Good luck and welcome.

Dave
8 Mar 2009 8:05PM
i didnt see any other buttons...not for Critique or mod...i think because i have a 1 a week limit cause i am new.
TonyB555 8 1
8 Mar 2009 8:38PM
The others have said most of the things. Black and white is just that, not light grey and dark grey and darker grey. I cant see a black or white in this image.Have a look at the histogram.
Sus 12 3.2k 9 England
9 Mar 2009 12:15AM
Its a bit dark and grey - with a bit of contrast adjustment could be a good shot.

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