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On my way

By Subhashsapru  
This image was made four years ago while travelling in the State of Jammu & Kashmir in north India.To me the colour of the sky and formation of clouds looked like burst of a volcano.

Tags: Clouds Landscape and travel

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.


17 Jun 2012 12:39PM
Yes. You are right Sapru ji. It looks like a Volcano. I have uploaded a modification after lightning the upper mountain a bit by using the doge tool. Deep

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17 Jun 2012 12:59PM
Thanks Bhatia ji, now it looks good.
paulbroad 10 123 1195 United Kingdom
17 Jun 2012 3:54PM
I think the scene as you saw it was probably rather more impressive than it has translated to the camera. really needed the colours to be stronger and more dramatic for me with a definite focal point.

apierzchala 11 17
17 Jun 2012 10:21PM
I would suggest a couple of ideas for when you next come across similar scenes. Try shooting vertical (portrait format) rather than horizontal to make more of the sky. If you use a tripod (and you should…) then it would be good to invest in some neutral graduated filters to even out the exposure between the bright sky and very dark foreground. The latter has lost all detail, which is a pity. I can well understand what attracted you and why you pressed the shutter, but unfortunately to the viewer that wasn’t there with you, the splendour has not come across in the picture. Adam
Thanks Mr Paul and Mr Adam for your observations and suggestions.

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