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Hi Brother!
Needless to say this shot immediately caught my eye:
-people;
-action;
-interesting color spectrum;
Critical notes:
Cropping:
-old man's right foot is not in
-on the right someone is in but probably should have been out
BTW, I thought you could have leave in the frame a bigger area where people we sitting, just to show compare the people's bodies and the gigantic furniture.
On the second photo it might have been better to include the building with it's roof as well as the wheel of attraction on the right
I hope you would not mind my pseudo-expert
comments.
Stay well
Your friend
GR
Needless to say this shot immediately caught my eye:
-people;
-action;
-interesting color spectrum;
Critical notes:
Cropping:
-old man's right foot is not in
-on the right someone is in but probably should have been out
BTW, I thought you could have leave in the frame a bigger area where people we sitting, just to show compare the people's bodies and the gigantic furniture.
On the second photo it might have been better to include the building with it's roof as well as the wheel of attraction on the right
I hope you would not mind my pseudo-expert

Stay well
Your friend
GR