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Our first photoshoot for 2014 - what do you think?

By trevchris      

Tags: Portrait Flash General Speedlight Chris Portraits and people

Voters: G3, handlerstudio, Alda and 1 more


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pablophotographer 9 1.7k 383
2 Jan 2014 5:54AM
Hi,

exposure looks right to me. I have doubts regarding the framing, while I love the leg that reaches the end of the frame and extends beyond, I would expect the full presence of her 'chopped' elbow. A slight zooming out or a slight move backwards form you would suffice. Good eye contact and seemingly relaxed model and genuine smile. Well done.

pablophotographer
2 Jan 2014 6:29AM
thanks for the feedback - its my first attempt at portrait photography so I appreciate a fresh viewpoint. Cheers

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