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Out of the Box

By chase
Another from my session with the modified box.....I did warn you Wink
Behind the book, bottles etc is the opening to the box, I kept it shut for this one but had a bash with it opened on another image.
Changing too many things all at once was challenging...baby steps ....far too easy to go for it all at once, not changing the lighting method or the bg. So this is similar to my first offering....sorry.
I like the books and cones out of the box, compositionally I think it looks more thought about.

Lit by daylight camera left, I used my big soft box to stop some of the light from my window, the result being less highlights and a nice drop of light creeping over the top of the soft box but still kept the darkness....I like dark Smile
Raw file converted in Lightroom, final adjustments in Photoshop.

Thanks for dropping by.
Constructive critique and mods welcome.
Please stay safe everyone.
Janet xx

Tags: Books Glasses Still life Wood Bottles Daylight Box Pomegranite Pine cones

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Comments


24 Apr 2020 5:05PM
Good to see you experimenting, but still a bit too dark for me to see this to its best effect. David

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Buffalo_Tom Plus
13 2.3k 11 Wales
24 Apr 2020 5:20PM
Fabulous Janet.
Tom
Irishkate Plus
9 42 118 United Kingdom
24 Apr 2020 5:24PM
So well arranged it looks like a natural scene from your living room apart from the quirky pomegranate!
KateGrin
mrswoolybill Plus
13 2.1k 2229 United Kingdom
24 Apr 2020 5:49PM
'Willie's Ordeal'... Tell us more, We Need to Know!
chase Plus
14 1.6k 381 England
24 Apr 2020 6:27PM

Quote:'Willie's Ordeal'... Tell us more, We Need to Know!

I am saving that story for another day Moira but, the ending reads....
So Willies' ordeal in the castle and Tommys' night of suspense were all for the best, for besides gaining such a good friend, they had learned lessons for life.
THE END

Book used to belong to my Great Grandad but his name was Reggie Wink

Thanks everyone.
Janet xx
saltireblue Plus
10 10.7k 62 Norway
24 Apr 2020 6:41PM
I like the light and balance better in this one, Janet.
Chinga Plus
9 3 2 United Kingdom
24 Apr 2020 6:45PM
Excellent still life composition
Isabel GrinGrin
capto Plus
8 6.3k 20 United Kingdom
24 Apr 2020 6:58PM
A lovely Dickensian feel to it.Smile
ivor
chase Plus
14 1.6k 381 England
24 Apr 2020 7:05PM
Thanks all.

Quote:I like the light and balance better in this one, Janet.

The light in general Malc or the chink of light spilling over the soft box ?
I thought this one was better balanced with the typical reversel 'L' shape in the frame, also I thought the books in the box balanced out the bottles better. Is that where you are coming from ?

Tom, great to have your UA, many thanks, appreciated.
Janet xx
saltireblue Plus
10 10.7k 62 Norway
24 Apr 2020 7:14PM
The chink of light.
The placing of the larger objects - books and bottles along the same diagonal as the light.
Plus the fact that you have a triangle formed by the books, bottles and the books/cones. Plus, leaving one compartment almost empty works better than having all filled.
dimalexa 3 5 Greece
24 Apr 2020 7:21PM
Great work again, Janet!
Dimitris
chase Plus
14 1.6k 381 England
24 Apr 2020 7:29PM
Thanks for coming back to me Malc, good stuff.
clicknimagine Plus
10 640 100 India
24 Apr 2020 8:34PM
Almost as good as your earlier one...
Daisymaye Plus
11 23 16 Canada
24 Apr 2020 8:45PM
Really love this one. Even more than the last one. But you will have to wait a few hours for an award from me. But...I'm sure there will be several by then.
banehawi Plus
16 2.2k 4138 Canada
25 Apr 2020 6:09AM
Is the title of that book Willie's Ordeal?
TrevBatWCC Plus
12 13 16 England
25 Apr 2020 10:48AM
Another wonderful still-life presentation, Janet - hard to choose between this and the last, love 'em both! 👍
Take care, stay safe and have a good weekend 👍
Trev 😀
Yogendra 16 22 1 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2020 4:04PM
Fine Art painting quality..Beautiful..
chase Plus
14 1.6k 381 England
27 Apr 2020 11:03AM
Thanks everyone.
Many thanks to Keith, Sandy, Daryl, Sue and David for your UAs, so appreciated.


Quote:Is the title of that book Willie's Ordeal?

Certainly is Willie, see, you really are famous Wink

Janet xx

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