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Pendle Hill

By kasuga
this was taken at sunset and just as the rain was starting to roll in. all comments good and bad are welcome. and feel free to comment on my portfolio. i ahve also put a slight watercolor wash over the photo. it was taken with a coolpix s8000 point and shoot like all my photos are.

Tags: General Pendle hill Landscape and travel Wildlife and nature

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CathR 10 151 564 United Kingdom
9 Aug 2011 10:19AM
it's a very pleasant scene with the sun's rays streaming through the clouds. the water colour treatment works well too. what doesn't work so well is the fence, particularly the fence post which is right in the middle of the foreground and draws a lot of attention to itself. Also the smudgy bits - is it wool or something sticking to the fence? I have done a mod for you where I have cloned out the marks as best I could but no doubt spending more time would help. It's relatively easy to do though as the blurriness of the treatment helps. A far better solution would be either to have gone through the gate into the next field to take the shot or if the gate was locked, just lean over it.

best wishes


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Stickleman 6 82 3 England
9 Aug 2011 3:58PM
I don't mind the central post so much as the chopped in half gate on the right,if it had been another fence post i think it(the fence) would have added a bit foreground interest, but the chopped gate just draws the eye to the right.Lovely colours though and whilst i'm not a big fan of 'effects' i like this.

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