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petrol station

By B00bi72
first project with photoshop. an aerial petrol station for military aircraft taken at the RIAT 2007

Tags: Transport Riat

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CanonMan 16 524 4 England
15 Jul 2007 8:33PM
Great angle you've got on this to emphasise the size but it's a bit too dark for me so that there's no detail of what you're actually seeing.

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albyn 11 19 Scotland
15 Jul 2007 8:46PM
Yes, a little dark for detail but the outline is interesting. A monochrome version might be interesting. I wish I could have been at the show!
Bob T
BriM 11 3
15 Jul 2007 8:51PM
I find it a little cluttered at ground level, esp. on the left. I'd lose the blue in the sky which intrudes on the lovely dark tones.
Good eye for an interesting shot.

jenquest 15 561 1 Tokelau
15 Jul 2007 9:12PM
Agree that it's a little dark but I do like the composition. Perhaps brighten the plane up a bit and make more use of the clouds by dodging and burning.
B00bi72 10
15 Jul 2007 9:24PM
thanks for your comments. this is the first time that i've done one of these so am a bit rough but once again thank you.
18 Jul 2007 3:03PM
nice try bro!composition is very good!just needed more practice on photoshop skills...ok ba bord?

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