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Proud Moment

By digicammad  
My Son and new Daughter in Law last Monday, one of the proudest days of my life. I'm preparing an album for them of some of my shots, this will be the opening photo.

As I was keeping out of the way of the official photographer, the original, which I have posted in the modification section, features a wooden bridge rail over a large part of the Bride's dress. This has been removed with a combination of clone, heal, burn and smudge tools. A slight softness has been applied with VirtualPhotographer and some distracting leaves top left have been burned in a little.

I hope you like it but, as always, comment and critique are most welcome.

Ian

Tags: Portraits and people

Voters: Jay44, tce5, Sus and 17 more


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Comments


tce5 17 61 United Kingdom
22 Feb 2005 12:13AM
It does look alot better. You have done an excellent job getting rid of the rail.
Tanya
Sus 17 3.2k 9 England
22 Feb 2005 12:38AM
Not sure that I like the softness, but they both look very happy. I like the way the skirt is captured - looks beautiful.
old timer 17 55 1 Scotland
22 Feb 2005 1:12AM
One for the memory box, Ian - congratulations. Excellent job of cloning, BTW, in getting rid of that bridge.
Jim
digicammad 18 22.0k 40 United Kingdom
22 Feb 2005 1:16AM
Thanks for the comments.

Sus, I suppose I should have sharpened it a touch for the upload. The printed version is only slightly soft, I think it must have lost a little with the resize for epz.

Ian
ardbeg77 Plus
17 1.3k 7 United Kingdom
22 Feb 2005 1:35AM
Congratulations Ian! They look very happy.

The PS work is excellent as far as I can see and I think the B+W brings out the texture of the dress really well.
Steve
jan 1 17 12 Netherlands
22 Feb 2005 1:43AM
Congratulations Ian.
A Lovely good looking young couple.
I will give you some work to make a Beautiful album. But sure it will be Superb.!
Jan
22 Feb 2005 4:44AM
You've done a really good job on this, Ian. One for the wall. Click
Jules
wallypics 16 3
22 Feb 2005 4:46AM
You have done a superb job! Great photo. I'm sure they will love it.
*click*
magda_indigo 17 418 England
22 Feb 2005 6:43AM
CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL, click (*:*)
digicammad 18 22.0k 40 United Kingdom
22 Feb 2005 6:47AM
Thanks for the comments.

Magda, thanks very much for the mod's. Your USM version looks much closer to the actual printed output. Can you explain what you have dodged and burned in the second and third of your mod's, I can't work it out sorry.

Ian
magda_indigo 17 418 England
22 Feb 2005 7:09AM
Sorry Ian, saw a typing error just as I was uploading, changed it, it went through twice, so, images 2 and 3 are actually the same, lol, (+,~)
digicammad 18 22.0k 40 United Kingdom
22 Feb 2005 7:11AM
Thanks Magda
simont 17 2.3k 4 United Kingdom
22 Feb 2005 8:40AM
This version is much better than the professionals.
You'd have thought that for the amount they charge they'd have noticed something like a bridge covering the brides dress and possibly spoiling the shot of the happy couple.
Anne
digicammad 18 22.0k 40 United Kingdom
22 Feb 2005 8:42AM
Thanks Anne but the original of this shot is mine anyway. I assume the professional didn't get the bridge in his shot as I gave him right of way and shot when and where I could without getting under his feet.

Ian
StrayCat 17 19.1k 3 Canada
22 Feb 2005 2:58PM
A lovely couple Ian. You deserve to be proud. Our daughter is getting married next month, for the 2nd time.

Have you ever heard of this;
EGhttp://www.bhphotovideo.com/bnh/controller/home?O=cart&A=details&Q=&sku=358195&is=R
turtle1 17 41 United Kingdom
22 Feb 2005 3:31PM
Beautiful couple and picture - great moment
BarbaraSmile
UserRemoved 17 6.2k 1
23 Feb 2005 11:47AM
Works really well - great bit of PS and like the soft look. Many congrats to you and them! I might have been tempted to re-do the leaves top left (clone out the OOF ones)
sze4j 17 56 Singapore
24 Feb 2005 8:25AM
Congrats Ian!! You must be a really proud dad! =)

Beautiful work that you've done as i compared this to your original shot. Must have been a lot of work and patience doing all that healing, burning and smudging.

And I also like the mod that Magda has done for u.
digicammad 18 22.0k 40 United Kingdom
24 Feb 2005 8:30AM
Thanks all.

Denny - that link doesn't work, what was it?

Mark - I have burned the leaves in a little. I left them at that as I liked the framing effect but maybe they need more.

Sze - Thanks, I like Magda's mod too. It probably took a couple of hours to get to this stage, no doubt would have been quicker if I wasn't still learning dodge and burn techniques.

Ian
starstriders 17 1.6k United Kingdom
25 Feb 2005 6:04PM
Excellent work there - I'd have never have guessed it had that much rail in the original! Lovely shot.

I like Magda's first mod the best.
frogsrcool 17 9 United Kingdom
26 Feb 2005 9:54AM
A lot of work has gone into producing this image - the detail you have put back into the dress where the rail was is super (it must have taken ages). I like the B & W tones.
Ceciliat 16 6 Philippines
28 Feb 2005 5:31AM
Classic shot!!Lovely couple.
Very well presented..
Congratulations!!

Cecilia
digicammad 18 22.0k 40 United Kingdom
28 Feb 2005 5:39AM
Thanks again for the comments. This is now hanging on our wall in a 40x30 frame and looks superb.


Ian

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