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Red

By minicooper
This is my attempt at a digital make over with Portrait Professional. Over the top or about right? Feed back welcome on all aspects, lighting etc. Tech details Soft box Model's Right
Translucent brolly Model's left
Iso100
wb flash
F4@125th

Tags: Portraits and people Flash and lighting

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banehawi Plus
11 1.3k 3354 Canada
19 May 2011 11:28PM
Looks OK to me, - though its better if we had the original to compare to. I noticed a spot on her neck, - dont know if its a blemish that the person has, or something else, but it could be removed. Also cropped as suggested above, and made the background white in a mod.



regards


Willie
paulbroad 8 108 988 United Kingdom
20 May 2011 9:49PM
Crikey, what eyes. i rather like this, but why not go the whole hog and move away from the conventional composition - come in REALLY tight on her face and eyes. And, if she doesn't mind, remove the spot on her chest.

Paul
colinmac 6 11 1 Ireland
22 May 2011 1:20PM
Yes, definately over the top. The whole picture has a red cast, look at the skin and white background. I see the idea you were trying to achieve but what I think may have gone wrong is that the hair area has not been selected properly and the red has bled into the rest of the picture giving the red cast.
Colin.

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