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Taken at the Damian McGillycuddy studio in Manchester.
An absolutely striking portrait! The forcefulness of the model's facial expression is such that it carries the entire image, but, I must say it also has a lot to do with the portrait's colouration and the way your spots enhance it. The one tiny problem I find has to do with the subject's right shoulder. It protrudes so much that it almost looks clinical. I don't know if this aspect needs a little more work on the shadows to smooth it all, or maybe it is my eyesight. Regardless, I am really taken bythe way you have captured your model's beauty. Cheers,
Very attractive image. I agree with Pauls comments on the shoulder, but for me it includes the other shoulder as there is a slope downwards towards the front of the frame; the closeness of the front shoulder makes it appear rather large in comparison to the rear. You could likely crop to alter the impression, or a square crop with her head only?
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