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Lovely!!! Well done the both of you.

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almiles 7 38 102 United Kingdom
28 May 2013 8:50AM
This works so much better than yesterday's upload where the background was very distracting. Here you have the background working with you, the railings drawing the eye into the frame and beautifully complimenting the angle of her legs. Even the bridge upright is not too distracting because of the way she leans slightly towards it as though resting. Her pose is a near triangle, a strong shape which can cope with the dynamic lines in the background and you've manged the lighting well, with her face not being too shadowed. I don't know if you used a reflector or not, I imagine it's hard in public spaces, but maybe a silver or white reflector just out of frame to the right would help lift her face a bit more, creating even more impact but that's a minor point. Another minor improvement might be to crop off or clone out the thin strip of shadowed bridge upright at the left frame edge, it's just a wee bit distracting and given how good the rest of the image is a wee bit of work like that would be worthwhile Smile
rontear Plus
13 8 8 England
28 May 2013 3:44PM
Repetition of shapes Jim.
Ron.
13 Jul 2013 3:37PM
Love everything about this shot Jim, including the location the pose and of course, the Red Underwear. At time of posting this comment, 3-35pm, it's just too hot for underwear, so the same shot taken now would be good.Wink
Enjoy the rest of this fab' Weekend.

John Smile
Fully clothed, this is a seductive photo, and a great image, with the symmetry of the bridge framing her.

Peter

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