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dudler Plus
16 1.1k 1605 England
26 Mar 2020 10:48PM
The rim light is gentle and well-placed: and it shows why most models are constantly brushing their hair...

You've also got really lovely angled light on the model's face, showing up the colour of her iris perfectly, though the general exposure seems a little low to me. I'd be interested in the lighting setup, and how you balanced the rim light and the main light.

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pablophotographer 8 1.5k 368
27 Mar 2020 12:32AM
Hi.

I am a bit puzzled.

The effect has worked.
The colours have not.
Red light behind a brunette - fine.
Red & brown above black & white dress - Nein.

So.... we either change the dress to red(?) or all black orrrrrrr we remove the colours altogether. Black and white and voila! (suits the dress too).

Bingooooo
redduracell

27 Mar 2020 3:12AM
I agree with John.....a beautiful portrait.

Peter
kaybee 15 7.0k 26 Scotland
27 Mar 2020 7:29AM
You did well
stevenb Plus
16 268 7 England
27 Mar 2020 7:51PM
Thank you John , Pabio ,Peter and Roy for all your critique and comments which are much appreciated .

Bill

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