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pablophotographer 9 1.9k 405
31 Aug 2015 9:41PM
Hi;
Nice lighting and dead space, I would prefer a bit more wider to show just a bit of space above head and below crotch, I would not say go to a portraiture format because the dead space needs to be there, to enhance the contrast of flat and ripped.
Regards,
pablophotographer
PranavMishra 8 52 18 India
1 Sep 2015 1:51AM
very nice.. luster and details have come out very nicely..
1 Sep 2015 12:46PM
Okay, now that I've pushed my eyes back into my head I can comment. GrinGrinGrin

Light and model are perfect. You did a great job on this. I like the composition as is. Smile
TanyaH Plus
18 1.3k 411 United Kingdom
1 Sep 2015 1:08PM
Yeah, what Carmen said!! Grin

I think you've got the lighting just about perfect here. In terms of composition, you could shave a bit off the right hand side if you chose to, as the space to the left of him is all that's really needed to highlight that superb physique.

There's a couple of light areas on the hand holding the phone (i.e. the nails) which could be darkened down a touch, but other than that very minor point, it's an excellent job all round Smile
1 Sep 2015 1:27PM
Thanks everyone for the positive feed-back, much appreciated.
Just this second bumped into the model (a colleague) in the canteen, he's getting ready for a competition and wants some more shots taken now he's a little bit bigger and with more definition, watch this space.
TanyaH Plus
18 1.3k 411 United Kingdom
1 Sep 2015 2:29PM
He's more defined now?! Good heavens, I didn't think that was possible ... Wink
Pollyjc Junior Member 7 5 England
1 Sep 2015 4:54PM
Great light & angle. Phew! What a shot!SmileSmile Smile

PollyWink
8 Sep 2015 11:11PM
Thanks everyone and ephotozine, this is really great news!

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