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River

By kozway
used my tripod for this one

ISO100
F22
Exposure for 10s

My first real attempt at showing motion in the water...comments and suggestions welcome! Thanks for looking Smile

Tags: Landscape and travel Wildlife and nature Humour and fun

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Boyd 13 11.2k 11 Wales
9 May 2008 7:04AM
Looks a little underexposed to me. The image is there and compositionally it works. The twig in the LH corner is a little distracting.
Next time don't stop down so much, try f16 where your lens will be sharper and try to get the exposure so that the histogram is pushed up to but not over the right hand side.
I've added a mod to try and illustrate what I mean.

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kozway 9 Canada
9 May 2008 10:04AM
cool thanks! I will try that again tomorrow weather permitting!@

cheers
9 May 2008 5:54PM
Boyd has pretty much nailed the critque, Ive added a mod to let you see how you can play a bit in photoshop. Nice one Matt.

Colin
kozway 9 Canada
9 May 2008 6:33PM
Thanks alot fellas, every little bit helps. I really love photography and I love learning and getting better!

Cheers,

Matt

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