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By Nobby9968
Wink Seen on Safari at Lewa Downs in Kenya

Tags: Wildlife and nature

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.


ItsMeJustG 6 1 3 England
3 Jul 2011 7:50PM
From my very amateur point of view, there is not alot wrong with this shot at all. Focus on the eye is perfect and the depth of field allows for some of the thorny branches to be thrown out of focus.
All I would suggest for this would be to clone out the intruding thorns on the right. They appear from nowhere. Removed, they would make the right hand outline of the bird clearer.
This is only my personal view, not meant as any offence. I hope you find it helpful.

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paulbroad 10 123 1244 United Kingdom
3 Jul 2011 9:38PM
Very jealous. Superb, but I, too, would clone out those few thorns on the right.

TonyDy Plus
9 10 3 United Kingdom
3 Jul 2011 10:45PM
Excellent shot.
Davesumner 11 28 300 Australia
4 Jul 2011 5:42AM
Hi John,

Welcome to EPZ and the Critique Gallery.

You've got some great comments above from Paul and Guy regarding the thorns and they're spot I think as the thorns are distracting away from your main subject, the bird. The composition is spot on with him (or her) looking back into the image from the edge and the body curve working really well down the thirds line.

Back to the thorns and I think maybe the bottom half of the image is a little too busy with all the branches and thorns down there so I would consider doing a bit of cloning.

I've uploaded a mod to show you what I meant re the cloning and I also lightened the shadows and its eye slightly as well.

Hope this helps

4 Jul 2011 7:52AM
This was the first picture I have posted. The comments are just what was needed and the modification has now showed me what I should be looking at.

Many thanks Wink
chensuriashi Plus
11 279 17 England
4 Jul 2011 4:40PM
Those Canons give fantastic shots from that range so looking forward to seeing more of your shots from Africa...Congrats on a superb first shot. Chen.
5 Jul 2011 6:04PM
Hi John,

This is really excellent..


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