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Romances

By RupertHitchcox      
Romances at The Isle of Wight Festival Rock Reunion at 229 organised by Hard Rock Cafe and TalentBanq

Anavae.https://talentbanq.com/artist/?id=3359
Joe Slater.https://talentbanq.com/artist/?id=2770
Romances.https://talentbanq.com/artist/?id=3487
Wild Front.https://www.facebook.com/wildfrontuk/


Tags: Photo journalism Music photography Rupert Hitchcox Anavae Joe Slater Ray Jones RHP Romances Wild Front 229 The Venue

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mrswoolybill Plus
12 1.5k 2053 United Kingdom
27 Mar 2019 8:45AM
Hi Rupert, welcome to the Critique Gallery. You've been on the site for a few years, I think this is the first time that you have ticked the critique button? You're LRPS and NUJ accredited, with an impressive portfolio of rock photography. I wonder - did you intend to tick for critique? And if so, what are you looking for in the CG?

A few thoughts. First, it's Wight not Whight, that makes a difference for anyone doing a tag search here!

Secondly - this is much more intimate than most of your images that I have seen, and it works for me. I wish the focus was on the lips not on the mic - did you focus there hoping for the profile to be in the same plane?

Thirdly, I'm not sure that the breadth of a 3 x 2 landscape frame serves the purpose, too much 'flab' on ether side.

I cropped tighter, I ended up with a 10 x 8 frame which seems to me to suit the intimacy of the shot. I added exposure which gives the purple / blue of the stage lighting as well as a bit more detail, and I reduced contrast. Then I used the burn tool gently to tone down the hair a bit.

Just minor tweaks. You'll find modifications under the blue button below your upload. I really enjoyed this, it reminds me that I haven't photographed a gig in ages. But please let us know what you are looking for in the Critique Gallery.
Regards,
Moira

EDIT - Just noticed, you appreciate Vivian Maier too. Grin

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Hi Moira,

I did not intend to click the Critic button, but I do appreciate the feedback, always good to get constructive feedback of work. Yes, I was trying to go for something more intimate in the shot, as the light looked good, I felt.

It was different from my usual style as you commented and I was unsure if it was working.

Regards

Rupert
mrswoolybill Plus
12 1.5k 2053 United Kingdom
27 Mar 2019 9:02AM
Second mod added, much tighter crop, a bit less added exposure, I prefer this.
mrswoolybill Plus
12 1.5k 2053 United Kingdom
27 Mar 2019 9:03AM
Thanks for the feedback, you were typing as I was uploading...
banehawi Plus
14 2.0k 4002 Canada
27 Mar 2019 4:40PM
I would try it as a mono without the hair, as in the mod.



W
27 Mar 2019 5:40PM
Good dramatic shot. In my opinion the hair detracts, demanding too much attention, but conversely I think that touch of red lifts it onto another level.
Mod uploading...

Alan
dudler Plus
15 855 1483 England
27 Mar 2019 11:01PM
Accidental feedback - like a sound check...

Nothing to add - you have the technical excellence, and going in close seems to me to work well. Part of me would compose with the whole microphone in shot - but I do think it's better cropped. It's all about the singer and the mike: neither need be complete.
paulbroad Plus
11 127 1282 United Kingdom
28 Mar 2019 7:44AM
For me the microphone is entirely dominant and demands all the attention. The face is very secondary and, as above, the hair is a bit confusing. It is different and makes the viewer look but, as I said, really a shot of a microphone.

Paul

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