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Ruin Window

By DianeFifield  
Taken in low light Quarry ruin, wide angle lens. Topaz adjust . Contrast brought up in stone .

Tags: Devon Window Dartmoor Ruin Moors Quarry Landscape and travel

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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3558 Canada
6 Oct 2010 11:26PM
Its a good shot overall.

You need to be careful with the use of the Topaz filter, - it can introduce colour casts, and also leave edges with halos. Both effects are visible in this shot, with an overly blue tone, and wall edges with halos.

Looking at the composition, I would suggest choosing the distant hill as a focal point, which means cropping space from the bottom, and adding a little to the top. As it is, theres no clear point of focus, though the natural one to me is that hill.


Ive loaded a mod as an example, and also reduced the colour cast, and lifted the shadows a little,



Hope this is helpful,


Regards


Willie

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SueEley 10 279 96 Wales
7 Oct 2010 7:31PM
Ilike the use of the window here and the line of rocks running along the wall. Not so sure about the triangle of sky top right, so maybe portrait would have been better?
7 Oct 2010 10:26PM
Thanks for your help everyone i will take note and look at it again

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