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Run Fay Run

By wupohan
Aug. 26 2012, Stovepipe Wells, Death Vally National Park

Tags: General Specialist and abstract Landscape and travel Wildlife and nature

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Focus_Man 8 481 631 United Kingdom
12 Sep 2012 9:50AM
I like the idea here with the dark and the footsteps leading to the rear and presumably nowhere!! However I do find it a little too dark (is it my monitor?) and accordingly will have a go at a mod where I will attempt to lighten it and denoise a little. I will also add a small border to highlight it rather than have it merge with the picture placement background. I think that the footsteps will still appear to recede into the distance.


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paulbroad 10 123 1245 United Kingdom
12 Sep 2012 1:14PM
Rather like this, but where is Fay? Possibly just needs the brightness lifting a bit. Simple often is best.

banehawi Plus
13 1.8k 3881 Canada
12 Sep 2012 4:35PM
Very nice, like it a lot.

My suggestion would be to crop a lot from the bottom to start Fays footprints lower, which also places the apparent horizon on a third, and a very slight brighten as in the mod.



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