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rural cottage

By williamsloan
I went out on wed night to snap a bank of fog when the fog was retreating you will see it in the images .So these are what and tweaked a little.c&c valued

Tags: Landscape and travel

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paskinmj 7 11 1 United Kingdom
6 Jul 2012 12:09PM
Great series of captures.
Matt

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Fefe Plus
4 23 31 United Kingdom
6 Jul 2012 1:16PM
Hello Billy, Nice set. I am presuming that V2 is the processed of V1, and that V4 is the processed of V3?
V2 is fine improvement on V1 so I have done a mod on V3 (I am presuming this is original) anyway, you have made some improvement in V4 but you have cropped away the over exposed sky which I feel affects the composition. So I have altered the exposure of the sky using the graduation curves of the histogram and fiddled with the saturation, colour balance and contrast till I felt happier with it. I then corrected the horizon a fraction, but it is hard to see the correct horizon for the mist ( this is not a critisim, the mist looks good) and finally gave a small sharpen. Hope you like it, and hope this helps. I have noticed a definate improvement in your images lately, good workGrin
Diane
Irishkate Plus
5 33 96 United Kingdom
6 Jul 2012 7:32PM
Hi Billy you cetainly have improved so much over the last few months.
I've even seen you give advice to other members and you noticed a dirt spot on one of my images.
I've done a mod on V1 today mainly from a compositional point of view.
I removed the vechicles just to tidy up image and cropped to put cottage on thirds.Grin
The image had great potential but I think you included just too much.
Last night a couple of members suggested a crop on my photo,
so sometimes we just miss what others see.
I'll leave it up to the experts and yourself to judge my mod.
KateGrin

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