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By jacksloan  
I took this shot in North Yorkshire while camping with a bunch of children. I really like her bread "smile".

Tags: Photo journalism Black and white Portraits and people

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27 Oct 2009 9:18AM
Lovely shot.

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pulsar69 13 1.6k 6 United Kingdom
27 Oct 2009 9:40AM
love the shot , however the contrast could do with a lift or some adjustment to the curves , its a little flat and murky , would be an excellent shot then imho Smile
jacksloan 8 12 United Kingdom
27 Oct 2009 9:43AM
Thanks Pulsar. I've added contrast and uploaded an alternative version. Better?
riprap007 13 1.6k 37 England
27 Oct 2009 10:04AM
this is such a strong image (and taken with one of the best cam / lens / film combinations around too Smile )
I think a crop to remove the sky would be useful (as suggested in the mod) for although this echoes and balances the white of the bowl is doesn't add too much (some context) and detracts from the excellent portrait (subject) higher contrasts help to give it a touch more punch

strong work
8 10 10 England
27 Oct 2009 1:12PM
A much better image without the white sky.
pulsar69 13 1.6k 6 United Kingdom
1 Nov 2009 10:14AM
agreed ripra007 , works well without the sky and like the punch you have given it , great image in the first place made even better

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