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mattw 15 5.2k 10 United Kingdom
1 May 2004 5:22PM
Eye catching and the lighting is nice and even. The skin tones are also pleasing. (However, and I know I am being picky here - I feel that this would be an even stronger if the model was looking straight down the lens).
Still, as presented - a nice portrait. Click

Mattw

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1 May 2004 5:25PM
thanks...it is my only ever attempt (so far) at a portrait. Fortunatly I left plenty of room for improvement. Next time I will have her looking at the lens.
mattw 15 5.2k 10 United Kingdom
1 May 2004 5:42PM
Give it a try - you are shooting digital after all!
Having the model looking straight at the camera is not always what you want - I just feel that with this particular portrait, direct eye contact would lift the image a little.

Mattw
keithh 15 25.5k 33 Wallis And Futuna
1 May 2004 6:49PM
Nothing glaringly wrong with this and no need to look at the camera...watch the roots though.
amwaluk 16 2
1 May 2004 7:45PM
I like.Prefer the natural look too.

Andy
ginz04 15 281 20 United Kingdom
3 May 2004 7:15PM
hi mason,

if this is your first try and portraiture it is a very good try. It is natural, inocent and I think her looking away from camera adds a bit of mystery. Ist you learn the rules then you learn to break them.

ian

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