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Shaugh Bridge Devon

By DianeFifield  
Shaugh Bridge Devon river flowing surrounded by lush green trees and moss on rocks.

Tags: Devon Water Trees Green Moss Flowing Landscape and travel Shaugh bridge

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7 Jul 2010 9:53PM
Brilliant water smooth effect the green stants out well so it makes the over all picture brighter it looks like you have cropped a small bit of the right you might not have but i think it maby would look better with more in the shot but you may have cropped for a reason or held you camera on its side when you took the picture, over all well done great shot Smile

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7 Jul 2010 9:58PM
Thank you for your very helpful comments and the feedback critque was so fast.
7 Jul 2010 10:02PM
No Problem Smile let me know if the critique is aproved
f8 13 9.2k 22 England
7 Jul 2010 10:16PM
I like your picture of Shaugh Bridge very much Diane, it captures the essence of Devon very well.
My only critique is that it needs a little more contrast to bring it alive. I have made a mod for you in which I used PS to enhance the colours. I used: image,adjustments,brightness/contrast to improve the pic.
Hope you approve.
7 Jul 2010 10:49PM
Hi f8 i do agree bringing the contrast up has given the photo a bit more punch thanks for the helpful comments and i am pleased you like the photo
paulbroad 9 117 1075 United Kingdom
8 Jul 2010 7:55AM
A nice restful shot of it's type. I would have darkened the top half a little with the burning in tool and then lifted the contrast a bit. Good though, in general, and the water looks fine - I get a bit fed up with the blurry water shots, but this one doesn't over do it.

Paul
8 Jul 2010 3:43PM
Thanks Paul i will try and darken the top a little
landscapepics 6 15 3 United Kingdom
8 Jul 2010 8:49PM
It's definitely a pleasing scene, restful on the eye. I'm not sure about the inclusion of the grass at the bottom of the picture; I don't feel it adds anything so personally I would crop it out.

On a more general note, I suspect that photos of rivers and streams, when they include a drop in height as this one does, are likely to be more appealing when the view is upstream with the water flowing towards the viewer, rather than downstream, as is the case here. The reason is that you can then see more of the detail of the little cascades, which are a useful element in the composition.
9 Jul 2010 5:16PM
Thank you for your comments i was wondering about the grass at the bottom of pic

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