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Sitting pretty

By becklespeckle
Taken in studio as part of my college coursework at f/11 and 1/4 sec. Comments/criticisms welcome.

Tags: Fashion Black and white Studio portrait Portraits and people

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riprap007 11 1.6k 37 England
13 May 2008 11:37AM
I'd have gone for a stronger backlight to brighten the white cloth (and get rid of the distracting wrinkles, the skin tones for me are just verging on being overexposed.

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SuziBlue 13 16.2k 10 Scotland
13 May 2008 11:39AM
Interesting. I saw this pic and was intrigued by the pose and the tension in the arms, and what feels like a tension in the face too, and wondered if this might be a gothic (not Goth) theme or undercurrent. Then I saw the title, which although she's a pretty girl, didn't seem to match the mood of the picture.

Sometimes the way one presents a photograph has a big percentage of importance in how it's perceived by the viewer. Titles, framing, pose - and my thinking is that you need another title to match what's actually in the photo.

If you were aiming for a pretty portrait then there are loads of things I would suggest, and they would involve the pose of the arms and the head, the direction of the gaze, the way the foot is distorted by the lens ..
CathR 9 151 564 United Kingdom
13 May 2008 1:25PM
If you want the viewer to focus on the face I am not sure this pose works well. What I see is big dark foot, small white face.

Catherine
ade_mcfade 12 15.2k 216 England
13 May 2008 3:47PM
notnhing wrong with a nice foot cath Smile

though I think the main issue you've got here is a slow shutter and lack of sharpness

the rest's been said
cameracat 12 8.6k 61 Norfolk Island
13 May 2008 6:31PM
Agree with the above, Would add that the lighting is somewaht unbalanced & the pose looks awkward and uncomfortable for the model, This translates into what appears to be a less than happy expression....!
16 May 2008 2:40PM
Thanks guys for your useful comments. I was attempting a fashion type shot rather than a portrait, which is why there's less emphasis on the face. I chose mel as my model because there does seem to be a sense of gothic undertones to her style I guess this comes across in the image. Photographically I agree it could have been a lot sharper.

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