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Sky Burner

By flyer1  
RAF Eurofighter EF-2000 Typhoon F2 ZJ700 [cn.0034/PS002/IPA5] at Farnborough Airshow 24.7.2010.

Tags: Photo journalism Aviation Eurofighter Farnborough 2010

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31 Dec 2010 5:09PM
Great shot - well done !

Chris

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flyer1 5 United Kingdom
31 Dec 2010 5:15PM
Cheers Chris, Im just finding my way around the site so I don't know if I have replied to you in the right place!
LynneJoyce Plus
8 20 99 United Kingdom
31 Dec 2010 5:32PM
Big Boys Toys, don't you just love them? Great shot.
CathR 9 151 564 United Kingdom
31 Dec 2010 5:35PM
Welcome to the club Martin. This is an excellent first upload. I have never had a go at photographing planes but it can't be easy as they move so fast. It's a great angle showing all the hardware underneath and the stuff (technical term) coming out the back of the engine. Good exposure too seeing as you are pointing up into the sky which can often fool the exposure meter.

I have uploaded a mod for you. First of all I flipped the shot so the plane is going left to right. I'm not one for hard and fast rules, saying everything always has to go left to right, but in this case to my eye it just sits more easily that way. This is because we read left to right, so our eyes naturally scan in that direction. See what you think.

It's good you have a frame filling shot for maximum impact but I felt the plane needed just a bit more space to fly into. I cropped down the left hand side and added more canvas to the right and the top.

I hope you enjoy being part of the club and that you get out of it what you are looking for. All the best for the New Year.

Catherine
31 Dec 2010 5:42PM
What a great couple of days that was. Great shot, got a few myself. I will be there again in 2011.

Happy New Year, happy snappin.
flyer1 5 United Kingdom
31 Dec 2010 6:42PM
Thank you for the welcome Catherine. I think I like the 'Flip' side of the Eurofighter better. I was introduced to the club by Sylvia Fresson, such great photographs and so many on the site. I enjoy looking at other photographers pics more than mine, because they are from all over and every subject. I am always ready to learn, you can never learn enough I think, but I have my fair share of Luck.....being in the right place, at the right time, with your settings about right.
Happy New Year.
Martin.
flyer1 5 United Kingdom
31 Dec 2010 6:49PM
Hello Bishelly thanks for your kind comment. Yes the weather was good and plenty to see and snap at. All the Best for the New Year, Martin.
flyer1 5 United Kingdom
31 Dec 2010 6:56PM
Hello LynneJoyce, Thanks for your kind comments, Boys Toys yes.... but my wife wouldnt let me have one for christmas, so I look at the pic instead. Regards Martin.
banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3465 Canada
31 Dec 2010 7:39PM
Nice shot, and I like Cathr's idea to flip the image.

Loaded an almost identical mod, with a little more sharpening and contrast, and enhanced the red/yellow from the exhausts.
Also darkened the shy a tad.


regards



Willie
paulbroad 8 114 1034 United Kingdom
1 Jan 2011 11:10AM
Great shot of great aircraft. The only thing I would like different is a darker sky to set the aircraft off better. The flip works too, but I'm quite happy with what you have presented - lots of hardware slung underneath,

ideally a blue sky with a polariser to darken it - aircraft is a simple shape for a cut out - how about a cut and paste job/ Even the logo is tiny and unassuming.

paul
thebopper 7 8 United Kingdom
1 Jan 2011 1:51PM
SUperb shot!
looboss 9 3.1k 7 United Kingdom
1 Jan 2011 6:00PM
Uploaded a mod for you..
flyer1 5 United Kingdom
2 Jan 2011 11:19AM
Hello Willie, like your mod and comments to, I did not edit enough [sharpening] thats me being lazy, Regards
Martin.
flyer1 5 United Kingdom
2 Jan 2011 11:22AM
Hello Focus_Man, thanks for your comments very constructive.
All the Best, Martin.
flyer1 5 United Kingdom
2 Jan 2011 11:27AM
Hello paulbroad, thanks for your kind comments, I will edit with your suggestions.
Regards Martin.
flyer1 5 United Kingdom
2 Jan 2011 11:31AM
Hello thebopper, thanks for the superb shot, but I was lucky to be in the right place, at the right time........and have the camera switched on!
flyer1 5 United Kingdom
2 Jan 2011 11:34AM
Hello looboss, thanks for the mod, it works very well, makes it look more metalic.
Regards Martin.
flyer1 5 United Kingdom
2 Jan 2011 8:08PM
Hello Everyone, I think that I been replying to your helpful comments in the Wrong Place, I will reply in your gallerys.
Regards Martin.

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