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sleeping awake beauty.

By katarr  
Same as in earlier pictures.Smile just vhilling with my model, taking pictures in the forest and just enjoying the day.

Tags: Portraits and people

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ripleysalien 9 1.2k 11 United Kingdom
26 Sep 2012 1:11PM
For me, nice idea, too many distracting grasses in front of the subject, the horizon is wonky which for me is distracting and if your gonna chop the legs off, Ide go above the knee or leave all in as it looks fragmented and awkward.
Than said, pretty girl nice pose, good idea, just needs a little work.

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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3532 Canada
26 Sep 2012 7:45PM
Another nice idea. Like just walking in the forest and finding someone lying down. Except alive!

Best to crop above the knees as mentioned, just seems to look better, and a slightly warmer tone can help as in the mod.


paulbroad 9 116 1064 United Kingdom
27 Sep 2012 9:03AM
Nice shot but needs the grass away from her face and there is a heavy cyan cast. I would warm it up a bit.


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