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Smile, Wink & Tongue Out

By wenzu78  
Hey there,

Hope you all had a terrific weekend and enjoyed some free time.

I know I did. And those of you who couldn't - I enjoyed a little bit for you's as well Tongue

Well let me get back to the pic above. I know I already uploaded this a while ago, and many of you though that it needed a little bit more contrast, and I also agreed to your assessment. The thing is that somehow I deleted the original and here I am needing to upload again as a new pic. (Pity as now I lost a day of uploading a new pic - but now worries).

Hope you like this better guys.

It's my have pic so far. Tongue

Cheers

wenzu

Tags: General Black and white Humour and fun

Voters: StevePix, MattB1987, alistairfarrugia and 5 more


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11 Nov 2012 5:49PM
nice shot great title

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wenzu78 4 7 Malta
11 Nov 2012 5:54PM

Quote:Nice shot great title


Thank you sir.

Much appreciated.

wenzu
alistairfarrugia 4 164 88 Malta
11 Nov 2012 8:59PM
Definitely looks more dramatic. If I could point out just one minor thing is that the knot coming out of the right "eye" is slightly blown-out now, you can barely tell where the edges are. A similar situation, on a minor scale, can be seen with the links in the "smile" chain. Try to drag the highlights slider to the left a bit, to reduce highlights a bit and see if you can recover all the edges.

Regardless, I liked this the first time and still do - it's got character and now it's better than before. Just watch out when messing with high-contrast that you don't blow out some sections of the image. Smile
wenzu78 4 7 Malta
11 Nov 2012 9:14PM

Quote:Try to drag the highlights slider to the left a bit, to reduce highlights a bit and see if you can recover all the edges.


Firstly I'd like to thank you for pointing the minor highlights issue as I noticed them also myself. When I checked the original it was somewhat dull and no detail at all. So I decided to crank up the contrast and balance it with a good dose of highlights.

I'm sure that if I try to take this pic some other time I'll be able to get a better natural lighting to it.

Will see and upload another version in the near future.

Thank you once again mate.
banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3494 Canada
11 Nov 2012 9:48PM
I like this. I think it needs to be more graphic, - higher contrast, sharper. Alistair is right, but the wire, - its a three pair telephone cable, is beyond repair, - perhaps use the burn tool to darken. One suggestion, since its tilted a little, is to straighten it.

Ive uploaded two mods, - as suggested changes applied, - and in mod2 I removed the wire, - but it works better with it.


Hope you like the mod,


regards

Willie
wenzu78 4 7 Malta
11 Nov 2012 9:56PM
Hey Willie,

thank you for taking the time to do two mods! I appreciate your input.

I guess I like your first mod better. You're right when you mentioned the wire it's beyond repairs. But it works just the same with it, right?


regards

wenzu
banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3494 Canada
11 Nov 2012 10:29PM
Works best with it, - makes it different.

W
Hermanus 4 4 South Africa
12 Nov 2012 8:35AM
I don't know much BUT I think this a great photo - well seen and excellent title Smile I trust your gorgeous young lad is still giving you guys much joy Smile

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