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11 Nov 2009 4:49PM
Great image - and I like the crop too !

Chris

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Coast 8 1.6k 292 United Kingdom
11 Nov 2009 5:31PM
Agree the crop works well and the background although strong takes you across to the main action of the portrait. The image is a little flat and dark although good catchlights in the eyes.

Think a little bit of dodging to bring up the eyes a little and make them sparkle would be almost enough to get this to stand out much stronger. I would take care with the lighting initially however as the angle of the light source has also pushed a dark shadow under your subjects eye.

None the less this is an appealing portrait with an unusual crop that works well. Creative and with a little more work on the initial lighting and some post processing to lift the eyes then this will go from good to great.

Paul
andy210966 9 4 119 Wales
11 Nov 2009 5:59PM
Love the deep shadows here Charlotte and the inclusion of the backdrop which helps to lift the image. A beautiful model and an interesting crop!

Andy
User_Removed 12 4 11 England
11 Nov 2009 7:03PM
Great crop Char, Sylv.
deavilin 12 341 1 United Kingdom
12 Nov 2009 8:33AM
Thank you so much Paul for your time and crit I will revisit this once I have the time and try what you have suggested Smile

Charlotte

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