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smokin'

By KathyW  
Persuaded him indoors to pose so I could have another play with the studio lights...

Tried to get this one a bit harsher to fit the character. Is "gritty" the right word?
Not sure I got there, but I used one light from the side & another light with a snoot to put a bit of light on his hat, which came out rather blacker than I hoped for...
All critique & advice welcome as I'd like to try more of this sort of thing, with or without the cowboy hat & cigarette!

Thanks for looking

Kathy

Tags: Black and white Portraits and people Flash and lighting

Voters: kitsch, tony64, lonely_oryx and 97 more

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Comments


tony64 16 204 9 England
9 Jun 2008 7:13PM
Oh yes! Gritty is the word! I love the slightly closed eye! Very Clint! Well shot!
Tony
lonely_oryx 13 61 55 England
9 Jun 2008 7:13PM
Excellent portrait, great lighting and pose
WelshKiwi 12 3.2k 2 Wales
9 Jun 2008 7:14PM
WOW, what a handsome dude Smile

You have got this perfect Kathy, the look, the capture, the mood and the lighting.

Took one look at the thumbnail and thought it was going to be magic and you didnt let me down.

Smouldering, gritty, hard (but soft Wink )John Wayne eat ya heart out.

God, CC is almost heart stoppingly drop dead georgeous Smile But Im sure its all your camera work Kathy. Wink

Well done and well done Vince too for being such a great sport and model.

Lee Smile
kitsch 14 439 4 United Kingdom
9 Jun 2008 7:14PM
fab shot..and pose!
i think you did a great job with the lighting, my only crit would be the light on his hands being a little strong & taking power away from his face, i'd have darkened them a bit in PS, only MHO

jo
challicew 12 1 1 South Africa
9 Jun 2008 7:17PM
Fantastic absolutely fantastic!
carterart 16 74 United Kingdom
9 Jun 2008 7:21PM
Works for me.
newy17 14 273 United Kingdom
9 Jun 2008 7:26PM
Stunning shot,,
ian
9 Jun 2008 7:27PM
Really like this image
JouŠo 16 56 Finland
9 Jun 2008 7:30PM
high quality work, Kathy!

Jouko
starliz 16 1.6k 3 England
9 Jun 2008 7:34PM
This is just superb love the expression has real 60`s detective look about it,lovely lighting and a great composition,brilliant.
Geraint 14 715 34 Wales
9 Jun 2008 7:34PM
Very noir! This is great. The expression and use of cigarette as a prop work really well. The b&w conversion is very good too. I agree with Jo about maybe darkening the hands slightly and maybe the ear as well. But I'm just being picky. This is superb.
Geraint
GMKhamish 12 1 2 United Kingdom
9 Jun 2008 7:35PM
This is one very, very good mono image. Now it helps that the model has the age and craggy looks to start with, but you set up the shoot, the props, the lighting the whole smokin / gritty image.It has, as others have spotted, an American feel to it harking back to a bye-gone era. Now make this a series and just for me have a female in the spotlights, regards, Geo.K.
Coleslaw 15 13.4k 28 Wales
9 Jun 2008 7:55PM
Like it a lot, very john wayne... Smile
Maddie 15 2.7k 2 United Kingdom
9 Jun 2008 7:57PM
brilliant...Smile
DaveGu 13 1 1 England
9 Jun 2008 8:31PM
My kinda shot, all thats missing is a bottle of stella.

Dave.
MalcolmM Plus
15 1.6k 5 Scotland
9 Jun 2008 8:41PM
Brilliant portrait, 'gritty' sprung to mind on viewing. Great expression caught.
cameracat 16 8.6k 61 Norfolk Island
9 Jun 2008 8:50PM
Oh! Er! Now there's a mean looking dude.....!

You really don't want to make his day...Sad

Superb image, Although I might be a tad biased.....Smile
AlleyCatz 14 274 6 England
9 Jun 2008 8:52PM
Excellent shot.
Its like an old american advert for Malborough ciggys!

~Alley~
MickyMc 13 8 United Kingdom
9 Jun 2008 9:22PM
Fantastic shot
Mavis
KathyW 17 1.8k 12 Norfolk Island
9 Jun 2008 9:36PM
Thank you all so much for your encouraging comments & votes Smile

Jo & Geraint - I see what you mean about the the hands... Might get him some liquorice papers for his roll ups too, as the ciggie stands out just a little too much, I think.

Lee - I am definitely not letting him anywhere near Anglesey unchaperoned now!!! I'm going to have to get him another hat in a larger size! Smile

Thanks again folks Smile

Kathy
ChristineL 15 39 United Kingdom
9 Jun 2008 10:14PM
I think you got there, what a lucky girl to have such a great model,
Chris.
Cormy 13 3 England
9 Jun 2008 10:21PM
If you are old enough,Dave Bodiewil is this could be Ray Milland.Great pic.
Cheers
Alan
xinia 15 54
9 Jun 2008 10:30PM
think this is excellent - the staring eyes - the puff of smoke - the still lit matchstick..... brilliant
Diana 14 2.0k 19 Netherlands
9 Jun 2008 11:10PM
Brilliant Smile Wink
Dianna
stix 16 924 87 United Kingdom
9 Jun 2008 11:24PM
Very Good.
Martin
9 Jun 2008 11:27PM
Kathy this is truly Brilliant.. !! Gritty indeed..
Could be Mr Bogart himself .. eally echo's that film noir period..
love the swirls of smoke....!!!

Its breath taking... deserves recognition..!!!

Nikki !
twordley 15 360 England
10 Jun 2008 7:42AM
fantastic shot, great tones and lighting
Wooly 15 112 4 England
10 Jun 2008 8:49AM
Excellent. Looks like a poster for and old Bogart movie.

Don't know if "him indoors" would be chuffed or not with that, so best not tell him! Wink

Alan
jeanie Plus
16 6.0k 6 United Kingdom
10 Jun 2008 9:45AM
Thats just blooming fab Kathy....!!
WelshKiwi 12 3.2k 2 Wales
10 Jun 2008 12:14PM
Ok, its not an EC I know but its a Welsh Kiwi Award and thats gotta mean something Wink Doesnt it. !!!! ????

Im beginning to wonder if there is a type of photography that your NOT good at cos so far Ive not seen an indication of it Smile

Just superb Kathy and I look foward to seeing more.

Lee Smile
CC is very safe Wink I aint got the energy for him lol Smile
User_Removed 16 825 Lithuania
11 Jun 2008 7:54AM
..super portrait!... congrats`!
KathyW 17 1.8k 12 Norfolk Island
11 Jun 2008 8:44AM
Thanks folks Smile

& thank you for the HC pete Smile Smile
HelenO 14 46 1 United Kingdom
11 Jun 2008 8:50PM
Fantastic, this looks like an old movie still. Wonderful tones and lighting. I just love this! Smile J
11 Jun 2008 10:56PM
fantastic portraiture, awesome lighting. well done!
Milla 12 7 2 United Kingdom
13 Jun 2008 3:35PM
Awesome work here, top class portrait.
LINDAW 14 18 United Kingdom
15 Jun 2008 8:59PM
fabulous shot, very moody and dramatic
Linda
markey075 12 93 United Kingdom
6 Jul 2008 11:39PM
excellent capture
10 Jul 2008 5:20PM
good work can be for a magazine Smile
cassiecat 12 39 46 England
10 Sep 2010 11:16AM
just love the look youve got here. congrats on the awards.lesley

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